Ronald Manning's Marginalia on "The Tonopah Effect"

1)  Same poem as "89049," but it reads and images completely differently. The lines are longer but still end-stopped. I am at a loss to prefer one or the other.

There are some word changes and line changes as well.

2) Essentially the same as 89049 ending and for the same reasons.

--Ronald Manning 1/22/92

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